Is This Love or Superstition
Posted: Friday, February 05, 2010
by Ravi Dev Chauhan
I don't know,
How can I show,
Wish I could say to you,
How much I need you,
Our best times are gone,
Words to say I have none,
The strings of our hearts vibrate,
And your lovely voice makes me resonate,
The times we spent together,
I am trying to gather,
Yet your face shall always remain present,
Somehow I cannot feel that depth of your love,
But your touch is like the purity of a dove,
I cannot give into the temptation,
For our love is a very complex equation,
Remember our times of loving,
But those memories are always moving,
Our talks had no conditions,
And we talked in all situations,
Yet there came no conclusion,
For you never took my love for inclusion,
Hence no evaluation,
And I felt lot of seclusion,
Despite my sad position,
I don't know is it love or superstition,
Yet all this mental juxtaposition,
Is making me lose my composition,
I hit my head on the pavement,
But I couldn't improve my heart's betterment,
What hurt me the most,
Was the fact that you didn't boast,
Please accept our love for all the reason,
I am tired of this mental treason,
Want to break out of this prison,
I am a man on a waylaid,
Tired of your verbal manipulation,
Oh God! Give me sedation,
I just want to be in your arms,
Our love should have no qualms!
Just say yes..
Just say yes
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More commentsEven though I am not a big poetry writer, I liked your poetry. It was a very nice inspirational reading for the day!Thank you Kevin !! Well I don't know about inspiration hope it made your day!
I am very picky when it comes to poems. I am sorry to say this is not my favorite but, I am sure it means something to you and that is all that matters.hehehe!! Well thanks for the comments !!!!
Funny that some of the comments refer to it being hard for a man to write - check out how many song writers out there are men - it's not hard for them to do it - they just have to have the desire to put it down in black & white - as Ravi did.
Ravi,That's awesome, thank you for writing this poem.No problemo ! you are welcome !
This is a nice poem, but it could have more depth and introspection.
Hey that flows very well, sounds to me like it can be a rap R&B song!Great words and talent you got.heheheh!! You got it spot on !!!
good piece of writing. I like your article. thank you so much for sharing this article with us.
Ravi, that was a great poem, a excellent addition to search warp. Thanks.I m honored !
Hi Ravi.I hope you will receive a favorably "yes" answer from her. Thanks for sharing this love poem. I enjoyed reading it. Well done.All the best to you and yours,Nenita
Ravi, thats deep! I didn't know that love was so complicated.
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